The Echo

I hear an echo,
A memory of the past,
Of things gone, but very much alive.

Within the echo, there is light,
Happiness, sadness –
And an occasional fight.

Within the echo, everything resides,
People, places –
A shadow or two hides.

I hear an echo,
A memory of the past,
Of things lost, of remnants of the past.


Thanks for reading. Feel free to comment.
Patrick Rain

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annavita
4 years ago

i feel your poems…

annavita
4 years ago

like yr poem and short stories..

Patrick Rain
4 years ago
Reply to  annavita

Thank you! I’m happy to hear you’re enjoying them. =)

annavita
4 years ago
Reply to  Patrick Rain

i feel your poems

Tahni J. Nikitins
4 years ago

Lovely words and rhythm. Very smooth.

Patrick Rain
4 years ago

Thank you. =)

Tina's Faerie Files
4 years ago

Sweet, enjoyed the read, thanks

Patrick Rain
4 years ago

Glad to hear you liked it. =)